You can't afford to have writer's block since you only have
25 minutes to write your SAT Essay. So to help my students
put pen to paper faster I created these 8 techniques for
creating a compelling introduction quickly. Try them and
they'll help you too.
1. Understand the prompt first
The number one thing you must do to write a great
introduction is to make sure you know what you are writing
about first. The biggest mistake I've seen in scoring SAT
Essays is that many students misread the prompt. To avoid
this I have my students underline or circle important words
and phrases to make sure they have truly digested the
prompt. I suggest you do the same.
2. Use an analogy or metaphor
Analogies require creativity. A trait that SAT Essay
graders love to reward. For an essay in which the prompt was
"Is it true that to make progress people must make
sacrifices?" A student created the following analogy,
3. Tell a brief anecdote
You can create an engaging introduction by telling a
brief (1-2 sentence anecdote) such as the following.
4. Use a quote that was not used in the prompt
It is useful to memorize quotes that you love. You never
know when they can come in handy on the test. For example
for the essay topic "Do mistakes lead to growth?" one of my
students wrote
This was a great quote to begin his essay with and would
definitely impress SAT Essay graders.
5. Mention a topic in the news
SAT Essay Experts will often say to stay away from news
in the body of your essay. And they are right. However, in
the introduction it can be very useful IF you have the facts
straight AND it's even better if it is a news story that
isn't well covered. If you use this idea make sure it
clearly fits the topic.
6. Make up an anecdote using very specific details
I don't recommend this as you don't need a creative
introduction badly enough to take the trouble to make one
up. I had a student insist on trying this and his were so
bad at first anyone could guess they were fictional.
Finally, however he started to put details that were so
specific that I couldn't tell if it was real or not. So you
can fool graders if you want to but I don't recommend it.
7. Use a cliche in an inventive way
Most books and articles on writing say to stay away from
cliches however, it's a secret of professional writers that
if you change a cliche it captures people's attention.
One student used the following cliche to make a great
introduction for the topic "Which is a better indicator of a
person's true character, their actions or their words?"
"A picture tells a thousand words" is a saying that
applies to the newspaper industry but which also applies to
people. The picture created by a person's actions tells us a
thousand words about him or her and goes much farther than
words do in telling us about a person's true thoughts and
feelings. Several examples from literature and history
demonstrate this point.
Using the cliche "A picture tells a thousand words" to
make the point that actions speak louder than words is very
unique and very powerful.
8. When all else fails just do a quick summary of what
you will cover in your essay
Make sure you clearly state your thesis and state which
categories of information your examples are from
For example, "Examples from history, literature and
science will prove that people care far too much about what
others think of them."
Most of all remember, you do not need to write an
impressive introduction so badly that you sacrifice the rest
of your essay. In fact I taught my students to write great
body paragraphs first as these are just as important. Then
when they could write them quickly I taught them how to
write great introductions and powerful conclusions.